Hi everyone! Here is a link to an essay that will help you by giving you some more models of good topic sentences, lead-ins and anchors. This essay isn't perfect but it is very organized and it proves the thesis! This is a complete essay with an introductory paragraph and a concluding paragraph - you don't need to have those now, but hopefully looking at another model will help you as you work on yours this weekend!
See you on Monday!
https://docs.google.com/a/hopkinton.k12.ma.us/document/d/1W0hI87bQwaVSaG5ayBgvC3Kkuje2YCt_ez_jhmDNUDw/edit?usp=sharing
